First 5 Pages of "The Awesome Ghost in the Machine of Videogame Aesthetics"

So, my creative prototype is already up, but my work on my paper was falling behind, so here's a link to my work in progress of a paper (the final paragraph is something I cut from the intro but didn't want to totally get rid of):

http://1drv.ms/1dcdxyy

Let me know what you think!