Only read pages 1-7. The rest are notes are possible quotes that I am going to use. I realize that right now the paragraphs do not flow, and I feel like there is a lot of repitition, but I am trying to just get down the thoughts that I have. Professor Burton helped me come up with a possible structure of the paper. First, I am discussing the negative things associated with food, and then I am moving to the positive. My last conversation with +Cara Gillespie really helped inspire me to talk about the paradoxs of food. How some are trapped by food, eating disorders, and how food can heal. I really am having a hard time translating my thoughts to paper. It may seem confusing but this week I am really focused on working out the kinks. The venue I am submitting my paper to has a limit of 5,000 words, so I will be writing a 15-20 page paper. Again this is very rough, but I will be working a lot on transitions and flow this week. Also let me know if you aren't able to access my paper. I went online to try to figure it out, so it may not work. It should link you to a Google Doc.
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