My Rough Draft
The next step
This has been a difficult process. I am having an issue on what is important and how to connect my ideas. I recognize that I have a lot of block quotes which is probably something I need to change. I am still struggling connecting my ideas. I wrote a whole new introduction, which I feel will help my ideas to flow. My number one focus is working on my introduction. I have used the texts to express ideas, but I am not sure how well they go together. I am still going to work on that this entire week. I changed how many pages my essay is because I am publishing it to a magazine. I am having a hard time knowing what the magazine is looking for beccause they have a limited view on their magazine. Most of the things I read were stories and not articles. I am going to continue to search for other volumes to know what they are looking for. Last week I did email them to share my idea and see if it was a good fit. I still haven't heard a response, but I will continue to search. If not I will look at the other venues I had previously selected. If there any any suggestions, or comments, as to what works or doesn't work, please let me know! Thanks.
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